Final front cover

Front Cover Draft 3

Double page spread feedback

I have received some basic feedback on my draft and I will now take these into account and create an improved version.

1. The page looks too boring for a main article
2. There is no title to the page

Contents Draft feedback

Mark Manley gave feedback based on my draft of a contents page. The following problems were addressed:

• There aren't enough pages in the contents of this page. This is an issue that makes the magazine look unproffessional.
• The contents of the magazine aren't exsplained in enough depth, making the page unimportant.

These shall be taken into account and I shall try to improve on these points.

Contents Page draft

Improvements

I have taken the criticisms given into consideration and have improved my magazine cover based on these points. This is my improved cover which has had these changes:

• Added barcode
• Easier to read writing

Second (improved) draft of front cover