Feedback for first draft

2nd party feedback

I have received feedback from a member of my class and they have given me the following advice:

1. Use an image in which all models are wearing appropriate clothing.
2. Change the sizes of certain features to make them more visible.
3. Add a bar code to make it look more official and professional.

I will now try to make an improved version by taking these ideas on board. This will therefore allow me to create a better cover that will ultimately be better than my first draft.