Evaluation

Evaluation 2 from Dragonium

Final Magazine Products

Final Double Page Spread

Double page spread draft

In this draftI have changed the font and layout of the title (bottom left). I have also removed the page separation line to show the full article.

Double page spread draft

Final Contents page

Contents draft

Contents Draft

Contents Draft

Contents draft

I have improved on my contents page draft by adding more contents as well as making better use of the space on the page.

Final front cover

Front Cover Draft 3

Double page spread feedback

I have received some basic feedback on my draft and I will now take these into account and create an improved version.

1. The page looks too boring for a main article
2. There is no title to the page

Contents Draft feedback

Mark Manley gave feedback based on my draft of a contents page. The following problems were addressed:

• There aren't enough pages in the contents of this page. This is an issue that makes the magazine look unproffessional.
• The contents of the magazine aren't exsplained in enough depth, making the page unimportant.

These shall be taken into account and I shall try to improve on these points.

Contents Page draft

Improvements

I have taken the criticisms given into consideration and have improved my magazine cover based on these points. This is my improved cover which has had these changes:

• Added barcode
• Easier to read writing

Second (improved) draft of front cover

Feedback for first draft

2nd party feedback

I have received feedback from a member of my class and they have given me the following advice:

1. Use an image in which all models are wearing appropriate clothing.
2. Change the sizes of certain features to make them more visible.
3. Add a bar code to make it look more official and professional.

I will now try to make an improved version by taking these ideas on board. This will therefore allow me to create a better cover that will ultimately be better than my first draft.

 

Music Magazine First Draft

The Making of Draft 1

Screenshots from Dragonium