Feedback for first draft

2nd party feedback

I have received feedback from a member of my class and they have given me the following advice:

1. Use an image in which all models are wearing appropriate clothing.
2. Change the sizes of certain features to make them more visible.
3. Add a bar code to make it look more official and professional.

I will now try to make an improved version by taking these ideas on board. This will therefore allow me to create a better cover that will ultimately be better than my first draft.

 

Music Magazine First Draft

The Making of Draft 1

Screenshots from Dragonium

Double page spread Reviews

Music double spreads from Dragonium

Music magazine cover reviews

Music contents new from Dragonium

Magazine Contents reviews

Music content from Dragonium

Pre-photoshoot planning

Pre-shoot planning

Who: Cyan Cities (band) - (Michael Edwards, Sam Hall, Joe Goodwin)

Story: Recently won award for best single of 2012

Location: Woodland/Grassy areas (abandoned areas will have the band as the focus)

Details: Neutral emotions while looking at the camera (wearing casual clothes)

Props: Holding guitars

Shots: Long shots to fit in the background behind the band from eye level

Text: Text can easily be added next to the band due to the space around them from the long shot

Post-shoot editing: Text could be linked into the image relating to the story and the band